Tuesday, May 18, 2010

Poem. Do you like it?

Such a flower, Pure and Beloved as a Lotus desired in every eye,


an angel of orchid decent,and a daisy of Babylon descent


Unique and desired as every nebula nursery in the sky,


Ariej be that name of her passion released in scent.





A boy of ignorance throwing Rocks of himself into destruction awry.


Casimir she sees. She lusts for he, and the Lady grows discontent


with her new peddles and Casimir takes her as his in July,


but only deep she falls, his pocket holds three things as her uprooting present:


---of sea-rain heart pounding pain and unescapable torment.

Poem. Do you like it?
I really liked it.
Reply:deep and equal in thought
Reply:That's a beautiful poem--it is really good, and deep. You should write more!


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